導讀文/劉寶彩/天津一網友考生提出“為什么英語作文就是寫不好？”問題后，進一步問：“大家可以看看為什么我寫的如下英語作文老師只給16分？”，題目是：Voiceo....

文/劉寶彩/天津一網友考生提出“為什么英語作文就是寫不好？”問題后，進一步問：“大家可以看看為什么我寫的如下英語作文老師只給16分？”，題目是：Voice of Campus為題，寫作原文如下：，我來為大家科普一下關于英語詞匯搭配共現性原則例子?下面希望有你要的答案，我們一起來看看吧!

英語詞匯搭配共現性原則例子

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一網友考生提出“為什么英語作文就是寫不好？”問題后，進一步問：“大家可以看看為什么我寫的如下英語作文老師只給16分？”，題目是：Voice of Campus為題，寫作原文如下：

“Dear school friends.

To enrich our school fife, we decide to start a school paper named Voice of Campus

There are many interesting parts ranging from Green Campus to Kaleidoscope of clubs in the paper. In Green Campus. we list some had phenomenons about throwing rubbish wasting foods, tooking down upon others and provide methods to prevent them ou can have a reading feast in Kaleidoscope of clubs，as the articles are written by our students who share their trips, their favourite music and so on.Whats more, you can learn how to study in learning corner，where excellent students share their learning behaviors.

Our paper is open for all of you who have an interest in writing. You can hand in your campus stories to us. We are looking forward to your news stories as soon as possible. Thank you”

本文作者回答網友考生是：英語是邏輯思維語言，不是中文思維語言，邏輯是英語的靈魂。

所以寫英語要“不靠中文思維靠邏輯”之方法才能寫好英語作文，如此考生寫作英語作文成績提升得高分。

英語作文之所以不能用中文思維寫，因為中文是發散思維，英文是邏輯思維。發散思維，就是平時說的，形散神不散，而英文沒有形散神不散之說的。英語是型合意合的邏輯思維語言。所謂的型合意合，就是指表達出的英語既要符合英語句型，又要符合表達的意思。

英語寫作的邏輯思維有四種方式①一因一果，②一因多果，③多因一果，④多因多果；其表達的基本形式是，以觀點為中心，左找原因，右找結果。這樣寫出來的英語作文有骨有肉升分數。

網友考生表示從原因和結果兩方面再審核一下寫的英語作文，看看這兩方面表達的是否充分。

網友考生說：“感覺簡短文字太精辟了，出乎意料……”

根據“四種思維一形式”先看一下如下寫作的英語作文，后看寫作原理及其步驟。

一、英語邏輯思維寫作英語文，其題目是：人要學會邁出第一步。

I feel extremely positive of stepping forward bravely in the beginning, that becomes crucial for the success of a plan to be implemented in coming days. This fact comes to that I would achieve only one ambition in a career that proves difficultly successful.

By means of this, I get to know about great effort I should pay on working towards my goal with self-confidence. Combining with this, I would take special measures, in an attempt by me to make a workable action plan to see promising future in my career.

That brings me to get motivated in the possible business kept a rise in potentially-financial profit, enabling my employees to live happily. This arises from the positively-developmental psychology to take the newly-beginning step towards my realistically- ambitious goal as reached of mine. This, I was only to learn later.

二、看寫作英語原理

英語是邏輯語言，不是中文思維語言，邏輯是英語的靈魂。所以寫英語“不靠中文思維靠邏輯”，其表達基本形式——以提示觀點句為中心，左找原因，右找結果，即：“原因句←提示觀點句→結果句（ 達到結果應采取的措施 展望未來繼續推理）”。英語為母語的人使用邏輯思維四方法，即：①一因一果，②一因多果，③多因一果，④多因多果。

三、看寫作英語步驟

步驟㈠說出主題，提示觀點句：I feel extremely positive of stepping forward bravely in the beginning, that becomes crucial for the success of a plan to be implemented in coming days.

步驟㈡主題產生的原因:I would achieve only one ambition in a career that proves difficultly successful.

步驟㈢主題產生的結果: to pay great effort on working towards my goal with self-confidence.

步驟㈣達到這種結果應該采取什么措施

This helps me take special measures, in an attempt by me to make a three-point action plan to see promising future in my career.

步驟㈤展望未來，繼續推理

That brings me to get motivated in the possible business kept a rise in potentially-financial profit, enabling my employees to live happily. This arises from the positively-developmental psychology to take the newly-beginning step towards my realistically- ambitious goal, in my belief, as reached of mine.

四、5個分步驟的各個句的匯總段落如下

I feel extremely positive of stepping forward bravely in the beginning, that becomes crucial for the success of a plan to be implemented in coming days. This fact comes to that I would achieve only one ambition in a career that proves difficultly successful.

By means of this, I get to know about great effort I should pay on working towards my goal with self-confidence. Combining with this, I would take special measures, in an attempt by me to make a workable action plan to see promising future in my career.

That brings me to get motivated in the possible business kept a rise in potentially-financial profit, enabling my employees to live happily. This arises from the positively-developmental psychology to take the newly-beginning step towards my realistically- ambitious goal as reached of mine. This, I was only to learn later.

總結：

大考考生要遵循：“不靠‘形散神不散’思維而靠‘型合意合’思維”之理念，寫作英語作文，才能把英語作文寫得與眾不同，才能讓大考英語判閱卷老師給考生——升檔次提分數得高分甚至滿分。

英語邏輯思維寫作可以徹底解決：“為啥英語作文就是寫不好”之問題。